The young and beautiful realtor, Brooke, is quickly being transformed into Brookey the sex slave by her mysterious dominatrix client. The dominatrix has a dark agenda!
Brooke is a beautiful young realtor with an important new rich client. One who specifically requested her! My, what a compliment. But is it? Or is it part of an evil plot?
The client is a mysterious rich woman named Legacy who is only pretending to want to own a new mansion. In reality, she wants to own Brooke! But why, other than Brooke’s beauty and Legacy’s BDSM kink?
Legacy has big plans to treat Brooke in low-down ways. The plans are coming to full fruition! But Legacy has bigger plans. She also has a specific fetish: she likes to seduce and dominate sisters! Oh my, Brooke has two younger sisters who are quite beautiful. And Legacy knows all about them.
Brooke is also best friends with two sisters, the ravishingly beautiful blonde Woods sisters. Can Brooke keep Legacy from going after her sisters and/or the Woods sisters?
Or… will Brooke, quickly becoming Brookey the subservient sex slave, help Legacy achieve her dark goals?
Hi Jordan,
I think this story beats/plot in this book would be better used for a different character. Three books focusing on Brooke getting dominated seems gratuitous. I found myself skipping chunks of the book at times since it reads mostly the same as the previous two books with how Brooke gets dominated. I would have liked to see the third book focus the seduction on a different straight woman, since to me, that’s your most interesting bread and butter. Here’s how I would have structured it below…
1st Book – Brooke’s introduction and domination by Legacy
2nd Book – Brooke’s aftermath after being dominated by Legacy. Then more domination by Legacy. Introduction of critical future characters, such as her sisters and the Woods sisters, are made. Legacy gets Brooke to buy into her plan of taking more sisters.
3rd Book – One of the sisters is targeted by Legacy. Brooke does some fancy, shmancy manipulation to lure that sister to Legacy. You’re a master at writing that.
Hello, Hello There!
I get what you’re saying, I do, and I felt the same way at times. One of my standards, or practices, or “things” is having detailed realistic characters and then detailed realistic reactions from them. I try to make the scenes and situations feel as real as possible, even as fairly unreal things occur. It is part of the magic! Brooke is a good person and a very loyal friend. I found it took time and effort (by me and by Legacy) to “turn that ship at sea.” I wanted to get more into other seductions/dominations — I am just like you, the early efforts and accomplishments are the best — but the character and thus the plot would have lost some credibility. But do not fear, we will get to all the pretties who need getting to. Also, the others will not have to be turned into friend-betrayers, which is a whole extra level of domination/submission, and so from that perspective, the pace will pick up.