This is a short novella and priced cheap!
Louisa’s heterosexual roommate, Heidi, brings home from the bar a tall slim woman with dyed red hair. Klara is bold, arrogant, and sexually hungry. She is also a sexual glutton for domination.
Louisa is shocked that Heidi would be interested in lesbian sex but much more shocked with how bossy and rude Klara is towards Heidi and towards Louisa. Klara is making Heidi do all sorts of crazy sexy things and Klara just won’t leave their place. Klara also seems to have plans and expectations for Louisa’s involvement!
Most shocking of all to Louisa is her own aroused reaction to Klara’s mysterious domination.
Louisa isn’t sure what she wants but Klara is. She wants Louisa to submit to her in every way possible.
I really like the story. I know itvis a very short but I wish the seduction/force had more instances. Maybe a reason that Klara had work with Louisa outside and a dare or bet for Louisa to try something new or to follow Klara lead for a mutual benefitting outcome.
I understand, Joe. I actually wrote this for a publishing company that had a size specification that I’d already almost exceeded. I ended up publishing it myself — they would have but I could not let them for an odd reason — but I maintained that size.
I normally like to put in more thoughts and more dialogue and more little scenes, happening, and seduction progression. I guess you could say I like to develop a slow burn that burns extremely hot.
Anyway, you are right, more could have been done to extend and develop the story. I will say I think you will find more of what it sounds like you enjoy in my longer books. Also, I understand a lot of people like the shorter content. You know, it is hard to please everyone. 🙂
I do plan to do more long story / short novellas like “Something That Belongs To Me” even though Amazon cuts the % of author profit in half for them. Some of my ideas are built for that length.
As far as a sort of dare of bet, funny you should mention that, I am just now editing the sequel to “Taking Over Tanya’s Step-Niece” which I think will be titled “Takira’s New White Mistresses”. There is quite a dare/bet/tradition in there involving Takira being “tricked” into drinking a foul mixture. She actually knows what it is and thinks she is going to play them by drinking it and then resisting their advances which will make them leave her step-aunt alone because she overheard both what is in the drink and what the bet is involving it — the the drinker of it will be ass fucked while banging her head on a wall or they must leave her aunt alone. Takira’s aunt has already submitted and Takira wants to save her. So, she’s going to drink the nasty concoction. But, they know she overheard and intended her to overhear them. Takira’s plan is to resist and shut them down… but you know what they say about plans….
Best wishes!