Chapter 3 was a long enticing suspense-building chapter and not Chapter 4 is a short enticing suspense-building chapter. It takes all kinds!
What are those mother and daughter Sorrelsons up to and will the mother and daughter Hartley perceive the threat in time to save themselves? The Sorrelsons’ plan begins to take shape….
Nice set up Charlotte seems focus a bit on money. Bur the Sorrelson could use that in some rp manner or social manner to get Charotte to strip without initially heavy handed domination. I can see “paid” chores in an acting scene progressing the story.