Lucky number 13 is not so lucky for Sapphire because she is stuck with Felicia who is getting lucky with her. Felicia is getting lucky because she has Sapphire getting licky. Felicia’s dominance and Sapphire’s inappropriate soaring arousal tag-team Sapphire into a state of sexual submission.
A long chapter and arguably the hottest chapter yet!
Such a GREAT chapter! I thought chapter 12 was one of your best ever. This followed that chapter very nicely.
14 is also finished. My friend editor says it is good but not as good as 13. But it is a needed step in Sapphire’s progression. It will post after my next book publishes, so, in about nine days or so.
To have the full effect, not every chapter can be written at “full throttle”. Like you said, you need some chapters to set up other chapters. I thought chapter 13 was fantastic but chapter 12 had more of an impact on me because of how it was set up. Still a great flow to the story.